Comments on: 2am, Friday night: no sex, no money, maybe some alcohol, and neighbours doing right by each other – and that means something

By: Leah

Leah — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 23:00:36 +0000

You know, a few days after reading this I still have a vivid image in my mind of a woman leaning out a third story window (Juliet?), a crowd below (stone him!) and a pick-up truck in the distance. Omniscient point-of-view, first person (maybe), mystery love thriller, I don’t know…who is the guy in the pick-up truck? Who is the woman in the suit coat pulled tight over the polkadot nightie? Does she know the guy in the pickup truck? What will she do? A confusing ensemble, indeed…

Oh, I see another comment about novel potential

Leah

By: Shannon O | Confessions of a Loving Wife

Shannon O | Confessions of a Loving Wife — Mon, 08 Mar 2010 01:03:27 +0000

Great story Kelly – I was hanging on every word. You have to update us on what happened next.

Thanks for sharing.

By: Natalie Christie

Natalie Christie — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 21:01:07 +0000

When are we going to have a novel from you Miss?

By: Catherine Caine

Catherine Caine — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 19:23:02 +0000

It’s so nice to know that your loveliness attracts others. I wish to come and live in Awesomeville too, where I can compare iPhones with the nice cop dude and scare the bejeezus out of your sister while I look at the pond.

By: Tree

Tree — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 15:26:07 +0000

Wow. I’m glad noone was hurt…..how exciting though. Great writing!

By: Sanford

Sanford — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 14:13:36 +0000

Perhaps this is one of the best examples of having a “community”.
Hooray for you and them!

By: Julianne Fuchs-Musgrave

Julianne Fuchs-Musgrave — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 12:36:03 +0000

I am reminded of the old adage: write about what you know. Beyond anything else–this is solid, clean, well-crafted writing. Wow–really great job.

By: Nicki

Nicki — Sat, 06 Mar 2010 19:18:03 +0000

I am glad no one was hurt. Good work, Kelly!

By: Dave Doolin

Dave Doolin — Sat, 06 Mar 2010 19:05:06 +0000

For the first time in a week or so, I was asleep at 2 am. And glad of it, too.

Nice twist at the end, “freshly brushed hair.”

By: Paddy

Paddy — Sat, 06 Mar 2010 18:59:53 +0000

man i wish my 2am had been that exciting. all i did was stare at my ceiling…